3 out of 5 stars

                                                                                   

                                                       This is a bit of a hard review to write. I have been really enjoying the series to this point. It is a paranormal cozy mystery with a witch and a werewolf traveling the world to track down a missing witch. Right up my alley!

I am struggling a bit with the writing/ editing at this point. My biggest complaint is the constant snorting that the characters are described as snorting....yes, you read that correctly. At first it seemed to be an endearing, if rather odd, characteristic of Lily. It has spread to nearly every character and every interaction in the series. Every character is now beginning to merge together as they all seem to have exactly the same personality traits. They are all sarcastic and constantly snorting, smirking and eye rolling at each other. Since I have become aware of it, I find that I am pulled out of the story every time, rolling my eyes along with the characters.
Not sure, at this point, if I will be continuing with the series. ( it is THAT distracting!)
 
On to the next....


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